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Amidst the fields of permafrost
I bow my head and bear the cost
Of ages in the in-between
Among the sins that I have seen.

The cold erased my train of thought,
A peace of mind I once had sought
When once the world was green and blue-
When love was something pure and true.

And in those summer days of lies
The peace was pierced by distant cries
Which I ignored, refused to hear,
And placed at distance what was near.

But when the flowers turned to grey
I could not turn my eyes away
As ashes fell at first, and snow
Began to blanket all I know.

No warmth to quell these quaking hands,
No wonder in this winterland-
The epicenter of my dreams,
And source of all the summer screams.
©2008-2009 ~ArcticSix
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Author's Comments

This poem took quite a while to finish. I started it in one crisis and finished it in another, so I find it interesting that it came together as well as it did.

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Whoa. O_O
That's pretty damn amazing! A very good rhythm to it, and well rhymed.

Is there any particular intentional meaning behind this? From my view, it seemed as though it was someone in a land bordering a war, who ignored the war until it reached them. That's just my interpretation of it, though. =P

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YoshiKyon's 100-Song Art Challenge~
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Particular meanings in poetry come from the reader, not the author, but this one does contain a specific meaning for me. It mostly deals with the same concept as your interpretation, but broader: how I ignored the signals that my relationship was failing and fought against hope despite overwhelming evidence to the contrary up until the point that I realized just what it did to me and the girl I love. But really, I like your interpretation a lot, in fact, it's better than the literal meaning. :)

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Wgah'nagl.

Cthulhu ftaghn.

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